Room 21

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Tuesday, 27 October 2015

Eagle and Squirrel

Great Sentences:  Eagle vs Squirrel
In room 21 we a learning to write descriptive sentences and re-craft the work to make it sound even better. Here are some sample sentences.

Mamia – The ferocious eagle had sharp hooks and was a blood thirsty, powerful, dangerous but ghostly beast.
Tyrone – He saw his prey and swooped like a killing machine.
Alistair- The squirrel flinched and dashed away, running for its life, WHOOSH!
Alex – The eagle has big wings and a razor beak.
Abbey- While the eagle flew out of sight, the squirrel peeked out his house hole, terrified, his heart beating rapidly.
Kaleb - The eagle is a predator who likes to eat juicy meat.
Esheeta – Sneakily swooping through the forest, the eagle looks like an owl bird.
Nirari - the ferocious, hungry eagle flew swiftly through the trees, chasing the squirrel for his dinner.
Ahaana – The eagle is a blood thirsty killing machine with razor sharp knife like talons, soaring through the sky majestically.
Alesana- The eagle is graceful, glorious and dangerous. It is also powerful and very magnificent.
Gavy – The eagle was staring with enhanced eyesight, dodging trees, not giving up.
Labron –The squirrel scrambled into a tree truck in the nick of time.
Tavita – The eagle is a beautiful thing to look at but there’s a catch.  It is a killing machine!
Jane – The eagle is a well designed energetic, sneaky, curious and majestic predator.
Emily – The magnificent flying eagle was fluttering its feathers.
Mohammad – The glorious dangerous eagle is furiously trying to catch its speedy prey.
Liam- The eagle kept its big pitch black eye focused, carefully not taking them off the squirrel.
Kamryn-Ginny -  The eagle swiftly swooped, dived and pounced off a tree branch.
Tanishka – The powerful, dangerous eagle is flying in the sky, swooping and trying to pounce on the squirrel.
Taparia – Whoosh! As a small, mini sized squirrel sat peacefully down, a hungry maroon coloured, ghostly quiet bird swooped down on a rough branch, thinking to himself, “I could use some squirrel stew tonight.”
Emmanuel – Once there was a dangerous looking eagle trying o chase his tasty prey. He swiftly chased the squirrel like a lion chasing a deer.
Trinity – The majestic dangerous eagle swooped down onto a tree branch. “ Yeah,” he thought, “I’m going to catch this squirrel and gobble it up.”
Mary- The killing machine soars around with its enhanced eyesight kept on its prey. Its tail balances and directs the eagle through the branches and leaves.

3 comments:

  1. Lovely job everybody. From Alistair

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  2. Cool you guys this is a lot of work for your teacher and you guys too. All of your work is amazing but the one I like the best is Alistair's one and I still like all of them but that one was very cool and I hope that you guys are learning a lot at school and from your teacher.

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  3. Great stuff room 21 ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป (*Abbey's Dad)

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