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Sentences: Eagle vs Squirrel
In room 21
we a learning to write descriptive sentences and re-craft the work to make it
sound even better. Here are some sample sentences.
Mamia – The ferocious eagle had sharp hooks and was a blood
thirsty, powerful, dangerous but ghostly beast.
Tyrone – He saw his prey and swooped like a killing machine.
Alistair- The squirrel flinched and dashed away, running for
its life, WHOOSH!
Alex – The eagle has big wings and a razor beak.
Abbey- While the eagle flew out of sight, the squirrel peeked
out his house hole, terrified, his heart beating rapidly.
Kaleb - The eagle is a predator who likes to eat juicy meat.
Esheeta – Sneakily swooping through the forest, the eagle
looks like an owl bird.
Nirari - the ferocious, hungry eagle flew swiftly through the
trees, chasing the squirrel for his dinner.
Ahaana – The eagle is a blood thirsty killing machine with
razor sharp knife like talons, soaring through the sky majestically.
Alesana- The eagle is graceful, glorious and dangerous. It is
also powerful and very magnificent.
Gavy – The eagle was staring with enhanced eyesight, dodging
trees, not giving up.
Labron –The squirrel scrambled into a tree truck in the nick
of time.
Tavita – The eagle is a beautiful thing to look at but there’s
a catch. It is a killing machine!
Jane – The eagle is a well designed energetic, sneaky,
curious and majestic predator.
Emily – The magnificent flying eagle was fluttering its
feathers.
Mohammad – The glorious dangerous eagle is furiously trying
to catch its speedy prey.
Liam- The eagle kept its big pitch black eye focused, carefully
not taking them off the squirrel.
Kamryn-Ginny - The
eagle swiftly swooped, dived and pounced off a tree branch.
Tanishka – The powerful, dangerous eagle is flying in the
sky, swooping and trying to pounce on the squirrel.
Taparia – Whoosh! As a small, mini sized squirrel sat
peacefully down, a hungry maroon coloured, ghostly quiet bird swooped down on a
rough branch, thinking to himself, “I could use some squirrel stew tonight.”
Emmanuel – Once there was a dangerous looking eagle trying o
chase his tasty prey. He swiftly chased the squirrel like a lion chasing a
deer.
Trinity – The majestic dangerous eagle swooped down onto a
tree branch. “ Yeah,” he thought, “I’m going to catch this squirrel and gobble
it up.”
Mary- The
killing machine soars around with its enhanced eyesight kept on its prey. Its
tail balances and directs the eagle through the branches and leaves.
Lovely job everybody. From Alistair
ReplyDeleteCool you guys this is a lot of work for your teacher and you guys too. All of your work is amazing but the one I like the best is Alistair's one and I still like all of them but that one was very cool and I hope that you guys are learning a lot at school and from your teacher.
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff room 21 ๐๐๐ป (*Abbey's Dad)
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